英語高分背誦 應用文寫作2009年真題及範文
Directions:
Restrictions on the use of plastic bags have not been so successful in some regions. “White Pollution” is still going on. Write a letter to the editor(s) of your local newspaper to
1) give your opinions briefly, and
2) make two or three suggestions.
You should write about 100 words on ANSWER SHEET 2. Do not sign your own name at the end of the letter. Use “Li Ming” instead. Do not write the address. (10 points)
&︾︾︾︾︾︾︾ 應 對 策 略 ︾︾︾︾︾︾︾︾︾&
本題目要求考生寫一封“建議信”給當地報紙的編輯。“政府對使用白色塑料袋的禁止令在有些地區執行得還不成功。‘白色污染’仍在上演。給當地報紙的編輯寫一封信，信中首先簡單地給出你的意見，然後提出兩、三建議。你的建議信不少於100個單詞。要清楚地寫在答題卡2上面。不要在信的結尾寫出你的姓名，可使用‘李明’代替。不要寫出地址(10分)”
結合題目要求，考生要構思一封建議信。寫信目的是對使用塑料垃圾袋的禁止令執行不力提出自己的建議。寫信原因是考生要表達對政府禁止使用塑料袋在有些地區不成功的看法。
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1. I am eager to give my advice on…
我迫切地要就……給出我的建議。
2. I, the undersigned, would like to express my concern about…
本寫信人想要表達對……的關注。
3. First of all, please take my suggestions concerned seriously.
首先，請認真考慮我相關的建議。
4. When it comes to it, my suggestions are as follows.
就這件事來說，我的建議如下所述。
5. You would be conquering it if you took my advice below into account.
如果您能認真考慮我下面的建議，您就會克服這件事情的。
信尾的常用句式：
1. Thank you for your attention to my advice.
謝謝您對我的建議的注意。
2. If you want further information as to this matter, please inform me soon.
如果您想要關於這件事的進一步信息，請儘快通知我。
3. I must warn you of your wrong decision, again.
4. Please accept my sincere wishes for your future.
請接受我對您未來的衷心的祝願
5. It is up to you.
這取決於你自己。
Jan 10h, 2009
Dear Editor,
I am writing this letter to you in order to give my views and opinions on our government’s ban on the use of plastic bags in local areas, because I think the effect of it fails a lot.
I know that there are many local residents in favor of the use of plastic bags so that many businesses would still attract their regular customers by still using plastic bags which has led to the “white pollution” in the local. However, in order to cope with the worsening problem, my suggestion is that a substitute for plastic bags should be made and accepted by the customers. In addition, local authorities are supposed to make relative laws against the use of plastic bags.
I would appreciate it if you could take my suggestions seriously. I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours faithfully,
Li Ming
(141ords)
首段表明寫信目的、寫信背景。
作者在中間段闡述了商家摸透了消費者願意使用塑料袋的心理，從而利用這點來吸引消費者。隨後給出兩條建議解決這種情況。
1. ban [bæn] n. 禁令 vt. 禁止，取締
They threatened to ban the book.
他們威脅要查禁此書。
2. fail [feil] v. 失敗,不及格; 衰退，減退
The first attempt may fail, but we don't care about that.
第一次嘗試可能會失敗，但是我們並不爲此擔憂。
3. favor [5feivE] n. 好感; 恩惠，助 vt. 支持，贊成，偏愛；長得像
He showed me his favor.
他表達了對我的支持。
The girl favors her mother with her nose.
4. worsen ['wə:sn] vi/vt. 使惡化
This could worsen the problem.
這件事情使得問題更糟糕了。
The patient’ physical condition worsened.
5. authority [C:5WCriti] n. 權威, 權力；[pl.]當局
Local authorities decided to rebuild this road.
親愛的編輯，
我給您寫信是爲了就政府在本地區禁止使用塑料袋一事給出自己的看法與意見。我認爲政府禁止令沒有起到作用。
我知道有許多當地居民贊同使用塑料袋，以至於本地許多商家爲了吸引住老顧客仍然堅持使用塑料袋，這便導致了本地區“白色污染”的出現。然而，爲了解決這個問題，我的建議是製造出一種被大衆接受並能替代塑料袋的物品。另外，政府應該制定法律抵制使用塑料袋。如果您能考慮我的建議，我將十分感激，盼望您的回信。
真誠的，
李明
原句：I am writing this letter to you in order to give my views and opinions on our government’s ban on the use of plastic bags in local areas, because I think the effect of it fails a lot.
病句：I am writing this letter to you in order to give my views and opinions on our government’s ban on the use of plastic bags in local areas, because I think the effect of it is failed a lot.
分析：這句話中原因狀語是由一個複合句充當的，其中主句爲“I think”，賓語從句爲“the effect of it fails a lot”。很多考生會把這個賓語從句中的謂語動詞“fails”寫成“is failed”，這是錯誤的。之所以考生會出錯，是因爲對“fail”的意思不清楚，這個動詞可以做不及物動詞，直接做謂語，沒有被動形式。
原句：I am writing this letter to you in order to give my views and opinions on our government’s ban on the use of plastic bags in local areas, because I think the effect of it fails a lot.
活用：I would like to make a few suggestions on how to carry out the government’s ban on the use of plastic bags in local area due to our previous failure in it.
原句：In addition, local authorities are supposed to make relative laws against the use of plastic bags.
活用：Besides, strict laws could be made by the authorities to forbid the continual use of plastic bags.