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The pie charts show the class size in primary(elementary)schools in four states in Australia in 2010.

【主體段分段】：

Body 1：New South Wales、Western Australia

Body 2：South Australia、 Australian Capital Territory

【開頭段】

The pie charts compare the number of schoolchildren in elementary schools of four states in Australia for the year 2010.

【概述段】

It is clear thatin all the four states, there were between 21 and 30 students in most of the classes.However,a class with over 30 studentswas the least common.

思路要點：

- 四個地區中 大部分班級人數在21-30

- 四個地區中 >30的班級佔比最小

【Body 1】

The distribution of class sizes was similar in New South Wales and Western Australia.Clearly,a class with 21-25 studentsaccounted for the largest sharein these two states(36% and 42% respectively),followed bythe figures for classes having fewer than 20 students(33% and 27% separately).By contrast,only no more than 5% of the classes had over 30 students. The rest classeswere dividedwith 26-30 students.

思路要點：

New South Wales、 Western Australia

- 規律相似

- 班級人數爲21-25：在兩個地區都佔比最高（分別佔比36%和42%）

- 班級人數<20：排第二（分別佔比33%和27%）

- 剩下班級有26-30人

【Body 2】

A different patternof class sizescould be found inthe other two states.Specifically, roughly half of the classes in Australian Capital Territory were comprised of 21-25 students,in contrast tothe proportion of classes having 26 to 30 students(38%). Classes with under 20 students occupied 10% in this state,9% higher than the figure forclasses having over 30 students.Likewise,in South Australia, classes with the largest number of students alsotook up the smallest percentage(4%). The other three types of classesshared a similar figure, at roughly 30%.

思路要點：Australian Capital Territory、South Australia

- Australian Capital Territory：

21-25人的班級大約一半，26-30人的班級佔38%

<20的班級佔10%，比>30人的班級多9%

- South Australia：

人數最多的班級佔比也最少(4%)；

其餘三種班級數據相似(大約30%)

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