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The table below gives the percentage of GDP occupied by health spending in five different countries in 2022.

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Task 1:圖表類型—table, 考查重點—數值對比，細化至三個方面spending的比較。

Introduction

The table depicts how the health spending of both public and private sectorscontributed toGDP in five different countries in 2022.

[詞彙使用——對於核心內容的轉述]

Body 1

When it comes to the total spending, two countries, the USA and Germany,draw immediate attention, as particularly large proportions were found, with 40% and 35% respectively. Meanwhile, alimitedamount of total expenditure was observed in the three remainders, beingwithin a narrow range of20% to 30%.

語言點小結：

同位語成分

原因狀語從句

伴隨狀語

詞彙：

程度修飾詞/短語的使用

Body 2

Regarding the public and private spending, the public spendinghad an advantage overthe private one, with the gap being between 2% and 5%, except in the USA, where the percentage of the former was 3% lower than that of the latter. It is also worth mentioning that the USA and Germany alsotook the leadin terms of the expenses by both the public and individuals.

語言點小結：

獨立主格結構

定語從句

主語從句

詞彙：

表現‘比較關係’的短語

Conclusion

Overall, the USA isnoteworthyfor its high total spending as well as private spending, while Germany stands out for its high expenditure by the public. Meanwhile, there were no enormous differences found in other four countries.

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